my letter to Mr cole

Dear Mr Cole 

Hi Im Dani

I’m in Room 14. I'm writing to tell you how important the you are                          as the school’s caretaker.                     You put chemicals in the pool, cover it to keep it warm, mow the grass, pick up rubbish and help others. If you weren't here or you didn't do your jobs the pool would be brown and dirty and cold as ice. The school would be a jungle with very tall long grass, flies would be buzzing, it would smelly (even smellier than a skunk) and people would be hurt and sad. Thank you so much. You shine like a star to our planet earth and school. Thank you.   

From Dani 

I learned to write a letter to someone else I liked thanking him for all his hard work have you sent a letter to someone else did they laugh feel sad happy or were they angrey